rolling straight down road
as if driven by purpose
aluminum can
is it any different
then mob in mindless frenzy
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rolling straight down road
as if driven by purpose
aluminum can
is it any different
then mob in mindless frenzy
Longing For Water 
Nice. In English English ‘aluminium’ has an extra i and therefore an extra syllable. I couldn’t get away with this tanka!
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We Americans are lazy and take every opportunity to drop letters from words. 😛
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